The Silver Chain (Unbreakable Trilogy, #1) - Primula Bond The Silver Chain (The Unbreakable Trilogy #1) by Primula Bond

When I first cracked the pages of The Silver Chain I was amazed at the beautifully written words. How well described the surroundings. You really felt immersed in the landscape of the pages. My first thoughts were “beautifully written.” Sadly that all quickly changed. The story is one that is pretty common of late. Rich guy with money, young girl with a talent and naïve.

It was the internal dialogue that killed it. Just way, way too much. At one point I noticed I had read a full page in inner dialogue before a word was spoken and by then I had forgotten what she was answering to. I began to skim read rather than savor. Serena’s almost ADD thoughts and reactions just didn’t endear her to me. *sigh* Sometimes less is more.


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